
Taatsu Over but still looking good combinations.
WWYD and WHY?

Who is G Uzaku?
Mahjong books author. And he is also works for other Mahjong tactics books as Proofreading.
He prefer play real mahjong rather than internet Mahjong games.
『麻雀 傑作「何切る」300 選』
300 Selected WWYD (Blue)

『麻雀定石「何切る」301選』
Mahjong established tactic 301 selected WWYD (RED)

New One!!!
『ウザク式麻雀学習 牌効率』
Uzaku Style MJ Studies "Tile Efficiency"
(GREEN)
Picked Tile efficiency related subjects from Blue and Red version and adding more.
Highly recommended for players who just started and not winning hands often.
G Uzaku also running his blog
(Slashing MJ Books! Slashing MJ games!)
Twitter: @mjbook
I'd probably fix 8s pair. Ryanmen in Manzu have overlapping ukeire and ryankan in Pinzu isn't ideal. Nakabukure in Souzu can produce two ryanmen blocks.